Thursday, November 27, 2008

You brought the words with you

Cross through
into another realm
of silence.
not knowing they have
no words and
suddenly words exist there.
You have given them words.

(a fragment of a crazy dream)


steven.nash82 said...

This is soooo cool it reads like an epigraph for Lovecraft or Crowley short story.

There's so much going on in these few lines, I reckon there's an epic work of fiction squirming around behind these lines chief.

Your first novel perhaps?

That'd be awesome - hours and hours of serpentine writing and raving and madness and nightmares

Give the people what they want laydee and write me a book lol

I know I've said it before but thankyou for writing again it's really really great to see new work on your site
You are very very gifted

hodgehedge said...

Oooh I like this is great dream logic poetry
Its like a poetry version of a film trailer now i wanna see the movie x

fallenangel66 said...

This is great. Just odd scary images linkedtogether like snapshots of a nasty dream.Actually when I reread it I dont know why I think its a nasty dream it just feels like theres stuff lurking everywhere. Like in the walls or behind mirrors. Like in Silent Hill or that Japanese film with Kiefer Sutherbauer Mirrors- ooh just made meself shiver at the thought.

Thankyou nightmare weaver