This is great. Just odd scary images linkedtogether like snapshots of a nasty dream.Actually when I reread it I dont know why I think its a nasty dream it just feels like theres stuff lurking everywhere. Like in the walls or behind mirrors. Like in Silent Hill or that Japanese film with Kiefer Sutherbauer Mirrors- ooh just made meself shiver at the thought.
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This is soooo cool it reads like an epigraph for Lovecraft or Crowley short story.
There's so much going on in these few lines, I reckon there's an epic work of fiction squirming around behind these lines chief.
Your first novel perhaps?
That'd be awesome - hours and hours of serpentine writing and raving and madness and nightmares
Give the people what they want laydee and write me a book lol
I know I've said it before but thankyou for writing again it's really really great to see new work on your site
You are very very gifted
x
Oooh I like this is great dream logic poetry
Its like a poetry version of a film trailer now i wanna see the movie x
This is great. Just odd scary images linkedtogether like snapshots of a nasty dream.Actually when I reread it I dont know why I think its a nasty dream it just feels like theres stuff lurking everywhere. Like in the walls or behind mirrors. Like in Silent Hill or that Japanese film with Kiefer Sutherbauer Mirrors- ooh just made meself shiver at the thought.
Thankyou nightmare weaver
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