tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post9021716213283415864..comments2022-09-26T08:37:45.849+01:00Comments on be the serpent: Breakoutbe the serpenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00741238317853342892noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post-22102624466784933012009-01-08T16:15:00.000+00:002009-01-08T16:15:00.000+00:00Meeeeeeaaaaaaaooow!!! I just loved him out of habi...Meeeeeeaaaaaaaooow!!! <BR/>I just loved him out of habit.<BR/>Regular routines of romance,<BR/>my part only,<BR/>I played,<BR/>my role of rejection<BR/>to perfection.<BR/><BR/>Go sylvia haha just keep your head out of the oven xhodgehedgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06576107822619298113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post-76637446814617959172008-10-07T00:15:00.000+01:002008-10-07T00:15:00.000+01:00Wow! You really are back. This is a really, really...Wow! You really are back. This is a really, really strong piece.<BR/>My favourite line's got to be:<BR/><BR/>I'm out, I'm up,<BR/>in terrifying shades of blue<BR/><BR/>That's gorgeous.<BR/><BR/>This is frightening, sad, optimistic and inspiring all at once - thats an impressive combination to pull off laydee.<BR/><BR/>The final stanza has an awesome sudden rhythm to it too (i've never been good with that), it really makes you slow down and emphasise each word, so you read with the beat.<BR/><BR/>You can hear that pounding heart in each syllable.<BR/><BR/>Congrats dood - ur back xsteven.nash82https://www.blogger.com/profile/12170451589468557651noreply@blogger.com