tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post5965931880337923349..comments2022-09-26T08:37:45.849+01:00Comments on be the serpent: The Day The Clocks Went Back (a writing date collaboration with Mr Nash)be the serpenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00741238317853342892noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post-2979949006855866072009-01-08T16:05:00.000+00:002009-01-08T16:05:00.000+00:00Bath ran cold my eyes ran dryI like that sooo much...Bath ran cold my eyes ran dry<BR/><BR/>I like that sooo much. It really emotes that feeling where you feel like you just cant cry anymore and you're all dried up.<BR/>And the bath ran cold?<BR/>Thats a perfect poetic line, i'm guessing the warmth of a person dissapeared? The fire of passion evaporated? Do tellhodgehedgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06576107822619298113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post-2599412500608776172008-11-29T17:06:00.000+00:002008-11-29T17:06:00.000+00:00Chaos called. We let him in.Awesome thats like the...Chaos called. We let him in.<BR/><BR/>Awesome thats like the mantra for my existence you warped lil loon!<BR/><BR/>the ink still wet,<BR/>the flesh still red.<BR/><BR/>You n ur tattoo imagery!<BR/>I love that too though the idea of the tattoo that thing that is so permanent and passionately loved when you get it but can soon be regretted<BR/><BR/>I really like the couplet which is made by the ending lines of the stanzas too<BR/><BR/>I saw you cry<BR/>I said goodbye<BR/><BR/>Its kinda twisted when looked at like that because tears usually endear but here they push away.<BR/><BR/>Love it love it love it<BR/><BR/>Nice Work ya big poetical freak<BR/><BR/>We must collaborate again soon but only if you promise to write something poorer next time so i look better <BR/><BR/>xsteven.nash82https://www.blogger.com/profile/12170451589468557651noreply@blogger.com