tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post3399032616385635727..comments2022-09-26T08:37:45.849+01:00Comments on be the serpent: Loose lips sink shipsbe the serpenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00741238317853342892noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post-53526574047480117132010-08-11T08:53:43.467+01:002010-08-11T08:53:43.467+01:00Love this one; images of war, mythology, love....
...Love this one; images of war, mythology, love....<br />Keep in touch, you escape artist!<br />IanBangkok.Ianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17264997701918500688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33282234.post-46235123383163116642010-07-26T16:31:44.245+01:002010-07-26T16:31:44.245+01:00You paint atmospheres in the scenery and desire in...You paint atmospheres in the scenery and desire in the characters really well and I think that's why people always like to tell you what they think or feel about your work, its because there is always a moment in the poems where it reaches out and touches you.<br /><br />When I first read it, the 3rd line really stood out to me. Its like in this moment you can stop and see all the people at once - the he, the she, the writer and yourself as the reader, and they are all contemplating the same moment. I like those moments in creative work where you feel like your stood on the precipice of something that is making you want to fall.<br />CJAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com